Thursday, September 24, 2009

Production







Rainbow strolled carefully onto the stage. His colours were all colours, such as amber, purple, green and black. His eyes were as big as dinner plates. His tail was as purple as the middle of a flower. Rainbow said "I am a giant dragon and I am very rare, so you may not see me again!" Then he kept marching like a very proud lion. Rainbow's scales were the most pretty things I have ever seen. Rainbow was the best thing anyone will ever see in their dreamy and exciting lives.
By Rosa

We are learning to use adjectives and similes in our writing.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Yes, Rainbow looked very colourful and most impressive. It was a fantastic show and the songs are still going round and round in my head.
Mrs Duffin

We're Room 2 said...

Rainbow was a magical being! I liked your descriptive language, Rosa.
Mrs Murphy